Thursday, April 7, 2011

NaPo 7 - Lord of the Flies

So, I don't like this one very much. I started the first draft a while ago, dropped it, and then tried to rewrite it these last few days. It feels very disjointed and angry, so I think it will need another rewrite in the near future, but for now, here it is.

(Also, the format gets messed up when I post it here as is, so, I'll link to it on deviantArt)

No comments:

Post a Comment